Re: pcp-doc updates: PG draft, UAG review feedback

[Nathan Scott <nathans@xxxxxxxxxx>]

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> Some notes from the PG draft:
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As always, quality review - thanks Frank!  I've tackled the big
item of Chapter 4 - adding several new sections about pmdammv -
and a small number of the other low-hanging fruit here.  I also
added in new sections describing event metrics in a fair bit of
detail - a new version of the PG is on oss now.

Alot of work remains to get through updates from the rest of
this review ... will get there over time, thanks.  If there's
anything that stands out in the revised Chapter 4, or new event
metrics sections, please send notes through too - thanks!

cheers.

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Nathan