Randy Dunlap writes:
> Hi Johannes,
>
> I'm replying to your original posting.
> I know that Richard G. replied with some comments &
> changes, but I haven't looked at his comments in any
> detail, so some of mine may be repeats (or conflicts)
> with his. Lots of these changes are just typos.
I just had a quick glance at your comments, and I still have nits to
pick ;-)
> > 6.2.1 Minimal code duplication
> >
> ...
> >
> > This also minimizes the impact into unswappable kernel memory
> EDIT: s/into/to/
Actually, that should read: "minimises the impact on unswappable...".
> > 6.4.1 USB and Logical Function to Physical Device Association
> >
> > Using a design from David Hinds (maintainer of the Linux
> > PCMCIA code) I
> > propose we create a generic ioctl() interface which can be used to
> > retrieve physical device data for a given logical device.
> > This data will
> EDIT: s/will/will be/
Should be: "These data will be...".
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Regards,
Richard....
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